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Really good

Very good, just a few things however that could be improved:

You don't need the big crash bang sound at the beginning, it doesn't work.

The end isn't really an end, it feels as though it should carry on, like it's building up to something and then it just stops.

You don't really need that thing from 00:38 - 1:03.

But apart from those 3 things it's a really good song.

Barrellaj responds:

hey thanks for an honest response- I put this together real quick just to see how everyuthing sounded, I know it's pretty sloppy, and of course way unfinished :p

check back soon for an updated version

also- the bang thing in the beginning- I have it there because I want this to be a build up and I want something before it

Awsome!

I love Greensleeves, and I love techno. So for me, this song is perfect for me! And, for anybody who just wants to listen to Greensleeves in its classical form, then listen to this song by me: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/253227

'This is an maybe an preview'? lol

It's quite good, I know it's a loop but it does get boring, and at parts annoying. Keep working on it I say.

Hwehu responds:

haha, yeah. I've only been working with making music in about 3 days now so im working on my music makeing skills :)

It's OK.

I think because it's the same all the way through you could have made it a bit shorter. It would still sound the same, but whatever.

Anyway, I think this is techno rather than Miscellaneous.

Although it's good at first, it gets annoying if you keep listening to it. When you make loops like this, you need to make them delicate to the ears.

Normally I don't give such long reviews for loops, but whatever. It's a good loop, keep it up.

ypsksfgos responds:

hey thanks man, and i do apologize for the length it really more so a friend of mine can download it and use it for him self he said he want a good sized clip so i got him one, yeah it is a little more techno than anything else but last time i put a loop like this under techno it got a .25 rating really fast so i just put them under misc.

Nice song

It isn't your best work. But it is a song that deserves a 10/10 and a 5/5. Lovely bass, great weird synth you got going there. It think it may be a tiny weeny bit too distorted at parts for my liking however. Personally I much prefer Hard Trance to things like this.

Box-Killa responds:

Hehe thanks a bunch

Cool

The beat feels like it's made of leather, if you know what I mean, the lyrics are great, and the way it all fits together is great. Nice work.

Peaceful...

This actually made me yawn several times. I think it's a flute in there, I can't quite tell, but the flute was sad, and yet the plucked strings were happy, it's a brilliant contrast. When the piano comes in it's like you're losing hope, but then the strings come in a 2:42 and something has happened which makes you feel great again. It's like that the whole way through, making you feel different emotions. Brilliant!

Lashmush responds:

Its a panflute lol

I salute you!

I've said it before, but I salute you! I've listened to your other songs, and I never would have guessed you were diagnosed with schizophrenia and affective disorder. I will also say something else I've said before. You are a musical genius. No only that, but you are strong hearted, don't give up! Prove those doctors wrong!

Nice!

I'm loving the weirdness of this! Yeah! I like how it switches between really hard techno and ambient. I like the combination. I listen several times before I wrote this, and I'm planning to listen to it several more times. Really good song!

Amazing!

It's people like you that makes the Audio Portal the Audio Portal. Most people (me included) are OK at making music, and there are those few people like you who have the potential to become world famous musicians. I salute you.

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